Task 1: Re write this text so that it has a variety of sentence openers. At the moment they all start with They or The.
Task 2: Plan the next chapter of Quest. Think of plenty of frontal adverbials and spectacular vocabulary.
Task 3. Write your chapter of Quest. Make sure there is plenty of decription and loads of action and suspense.
Task 4: Write the final paragrpah of the story, can you include a flashback to teh beginning of the story.